Looks like you had some fun out there!
Passing is both an acquired skill and faith in the other rider. What you'll find is, yellow becomes a mix of those just coming out of green still learning the lines, (and only at TMP) street kids thinking green is too low for them for their 1st or 2nd track day, and riders near red level pace. Using caution when passing in any group is a good idea, quite a bit more so in yellow due to the rider variability.
Generally this looks fairly smooth, nice flowing inputs to the bike. Nothing is sudden which is good. Turn 7 (right before the marshal station) you are consistently way wide which makes me think you are looking at the markers not up the road at the apex when you turn in. As you gain pace, think of turn 2 and turn 3 as a single decreasing radius turn. Carry the speed through 2 and continue the lean all the way to 3 as a single decreasing radius corner. I like that you deliberately aim for the braking markers.
One thing to work on here is vision. Always look ahead and see the line. Coming up to a corner aim for your braking marker (you do this already), but way before you hit it, be looking at the apex. Once you hit the brakes and start to turn in, you should be selecting your exit line and looking where you want the bike to be and when to start getting on the gas. Markers are only markers, don't use them as absolutes.
When hitting the apex, have the wheel just inside the curb. Keep in mind as you lean, your body/knee might be over the grass, but the wheel is in the correct position on the track. Other than that, keep it up!
Top of 5th on the front straight is the target.