Great video.
I would work on your audio editing/mixing. You have at least 2 different camera's in there and their audio is very different so its sounds all over the place when you are switching camera shots. Sometimes you have background noise, then sometimes you muted it out. The song loop is inconsistent.
Otherwise, great idea and good execution. I can tell your gear is nothing fancy so I'm not expecting a blockbuster or anything.
Keep it up, you can only improve!